Keep the idea, it is a decent one, but either replace the author, or get somebody to edit the book.
Like I stated earlier, if a child were turning this in as an elementary school project, I would have put red marks on just about every page, but I would be kind and still give a decent grade.but this wasn't written by a child, it is written for children to learn from.
Or perhaps I am misunderstanding the use of the word "original".Īlso, the Grand Canyon is not in Colorado as the title on that page states, nor can the "northern lights" be seen in Antarctica, since those lights would be called the "southern lights". The sentence structure if often confusing, and there are many things in the book that are misleading and still more that are simply wrong.įor instance, "Original Seven Wonders of the Earth", is easy to overlook, but they can't be "original" since one of the seven is on the list specifically because it has been witnessed with recent recorded history. There are several things, like the "angelic" airlines that lightly push towards religion, which is never acceptable in a children's book. Most of the artwork in the book consists of photographs (without citation) that look like they were taken off the internet and had cartoon airplanes added to the photos to get past the copyright laws. If this were an elementary school project, It would receive a B at best, and when you are selling a product, especially one that is trying to teach our youth, it needs to be an A+. This is most definitely a children's book.
I don't want to be rude to a book that I won for free, but I write these reviews for myself and for anybody that might be thinking of buying a book.
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